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Author: EpsilonpsiiChi
ASL Info:    20 years old/ There.
Elite Ratio:    5.33 - 24 /12 /10
Words: 114
Class/Type: Poetry /Sorry
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Written November 9, 2008 10:01am


I am sorry-

That I was not there when you needed me,
when you begged to be brought to life.
When you almost slipped off my tongue,
Begging to be released.

I am sorry-

When I would not-
When ink would not spill
Paper would not be near.
An excuse!
for you and I both know,
The flesh is all we need..

I am sorry-

That I did not let you roam free.
Craving, needing that attention.

I've kept you locked away.
Drenched and unforgiving; a whole year.

No light, no

I am sorry-
Thoughts. For not spilling more ink on flesh.

Submitted on 2009-01-05 02:19:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  an apology to words that could have been? original for sure.

personally I think I would go with just one "I am sorry", at the top.
also maybe drop the "that"s, I think it feels better w/out them.

just a couple suggestions.

I hate it when I have a great idea and fail to act.
lazy? probably.
| Posted on 2009-01-07 00:00:00 | by pokechop | [ Reply to This ]

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