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    dots Submission Name: Ballerina (Short Version).dots
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    Author: EpsilonpsiiChi
    ASL Info:    20 years old/ There.
    Elite Ratio:    5.33 - 24/12/10
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Story/Passion
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1497



    Description:
       I wrote it on the same day as the previous and next posts- November 16th.

    A week or two later I came to a conclusion that I want to turn this into a real story, not just vague thoughts.


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    dotsBallerina (Short Version).dots
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    Ballerina had her sights on him.
    In the crowd
    Who would not?
    Such a pretty boy
    Eyes on fire behind lush brown hair.
    Who would not want him?
    But she wanted him more.
    And as the first curtain slowly drew
    He caught sight of her too.
    In black from head to toe
    She began to walk off.
    In her mind she still wanted him more.

    Behind the curtains of deciet
    Was where he had found her
    reflection
    Escaping into the hallway
    Out in the open- empty chairs,
    Where is he?
    The music has died now
    Everyone but the celloist leaving.
    "Play for me, if only this once.."

    Head spinning,
    One after the other
    Heart racing.

    But he was behind her the entire time;
    Gazing- fascinated, he was struck.
    And in the theatre their eyes met.
    With only one other remaining
    to fill the room with a meloncholic trance.

    Behind the rows, inbetween the seats
    where no man dared to seep in,
    they stood.
    Sparks from his eyes illuminating hers
    flash against flesh.
    This rythem, this obscurity;
    how long can this go on.
    Closer she wants him,
    Close he wants her, even more.

    But he is running,
    Leaving the celloist to drown in his own sadness.
    He is running,
    Leaving her; eyes no longer illuminated.




    Submitted on 2009-01-05 02:34:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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