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    Author: EpsilonpsiiChi
    ASL Info:    20 years old/ There.
    Elite Ratio:    5.33 - 24/12/10
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Story/Satire
    Total Views: 79
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1005



    Description:
       11-16-08.
    Couldn't resist making fun of myself, as I sat on the stairs watching the sun set, eyes half closing, and definitly over-smoked.

    Luckily (and unfortunatly for some) I did not fall over, as I thought I would.


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    Turn up the music.
    The stairs are shaking under me.
    Turn up the music because I am falling.
    Unsteady fifth floor
    Could not have asked for more.
    One small mistake-
    I go diving over the railing.
    One small mistake-
    And I am dying.
    How did this happen, how am I flying.
    -Blast up that music even louder
    because the hospital across is uprooting.
    Blast it up because it is shattering.
    I am shattering.
    How did this come to be.
    How could I not foresee.
    Oh, this over-drinking and over-smoking.
    I just wanted one more,
    One last

    ....

    Who could've foreseen such a tragedy
    To occur
    Right in front of our virgin eyes.
    Oh do speak!
    Do not go- do not weep.
    Gathered here we are,
    Ash flying by.
    And what a marvelous afternoon it is.
    Us all scattered here.
    I could not have asked for more.




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    ||| Comments |||
      i've been here a lot. it's a wobbly place, one that's kinda fun but kinda not, i guess. it's good to poke fun at oneself... keeps it all real, i think. yep.

    i'm not sure where i'm going with this half-arsed comment. so i think i'll stop.

    yes.
    don't slip.
    | Posted on 2009-01-05 00:00:00 | by meoww | [ Reply to This ]



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