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    dots Submission Name: reclining in palmistrydots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 576
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsreclining in palmistrydots
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    a third of the world's bird population
    lives in my hair
    reclining in palmistry.
    my scalp is ecuador
    & i claim it for your own.

    when in mirrors,
    do as mirrors do.
    it's easy,
    or at least as easy
    as you want it to be.
    just smile & wonder why you can.

    wait,
    let me start over.
    we were discussing birds
    & how often it seems
    that the tongue
    has a mind of it's own.
    or was it lavender
    & how the soul seeps
    into glistering light
    & your own?

    there are too many things
    to describe & i'm missing letters
    amongst my words.
    would you marry me in turqoise
    when the deepness
    of another winter approaches?
    we're all texting backwards
    as to better get the point across.

    & the night is mysterious
    from daylight's point of view,
    always approaching,
    but never really here.
    later remembering this
    i'll go plenty mad.




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