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    dots Submission Name: When I Wasn't Lookingdots
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    Author: mae
    Elite Ratio:    5.97 - 596/642/259
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I wrote this for my youngest son's 24th birthday. When he was very young, each night he would tell me he loved me more than "all chemistry" - because that left nothing else for me to say.


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    dotsWhen I Wasn't Lookingdots
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    You grew so tall, my son,
    When I wasn’t looking, it seems.
    One moment I was tucking you in,
    Sparring with you over which of us
    Loved the other more.

    Then I blinked.

    When I looked again, you were wearing
    Baggy pants and putting gel in your hair.
    You were playing baseball and basketball
    And I was driving you to practice.

    But I looked over my shoulder to turn the corner

    And when I turned back you were taller than I.
    You had a beard
    And a girlfriend
    And graduation was just a little bit away.

    I looked down to wrap your graduation gift.

    When I looked up, you were married and
    Had a baby, my beautiful little granddaughter.
    You were holding her so gently
    That it made me cry.

    And I know that when you tuck her in
    You’ll tell her that you love her
    More than all the world,

    Like you used to tell me.







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      Very nice Mae. I have 5 children and have written them poems or stories from time to time , so I know that such pieces come staright from the heart. There is no way to critique such poetry, but I can say that this touched me as I related so well to the feelings involved.

    Happy New year,

    Sally
    | Posted on 2009-01-05 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]



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