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    dots Submission Name: So Easilydots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 262/263/207
    Words: 335
    Class/Type: Lyrics/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 78
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2064



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       This took a lot to write. I haven't written about this guy since the summer, but i guess some things don't go away.


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    dotsSo Easilydots
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    How come every time
    I easily give up my heart.
    Why do I cry
    Every time we're apart.
    So when you're alone in your room
    And you're thinking about her.
    Just now I'm crying myself to sleep
    Thinking about how we were.
    Because you give me away
    So easily.
    But I always let you give me away
    So easily.

    Every night as my tears fall
    I think of you.
    Every time I talk to you
    I hope you feel that way too.
    Every night as my tears fall
    I'm crying about you.
    But you can't see that deep down
    I'm still in love with you.

    You're the last person
    I would think to play a game.
    Because I thought that you
    Would always be the same.
    When I first met you
    I gave you all of me.
    But now I want it back
    Since we can never be.
    Because you give me away
    So easily.
    But I always let you give me away
    So easily.

    Every night as my tears fall
    I think of you.
    Every time I talk to you
    I hope you feel that way too.
    Every night as my tears fall
    I'm crying about you.
    But u can't see that deep down
    I'm still in love with you.

    And time and time
    I try to put you out of my life.
    But you don't want to go.
    You say you want to be with me
    But you're still with her
    And I just want to let you know
    I'm not going to be
    The one that you can always come back to.
    Because you give me away
    So easily.
    But I always let you give me away
    So easily.

    Every night as my tears fall
    I think of you.
    Every time I talk to you
    I hope you feel that way too.
    Every night as my tears fall
    I'm crying about you.
    But u can't see that deep down
    I'm still in love with you.





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