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    dots Submission Name: frustrationdots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsfrustrationdots
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    when i think of you
    i wish i could tie you up
    put little paper cuts all over you
    leaving no space untouched
    cut your fingers off
    and watch you bleed
    splap you around
    and put you down
    like you always did to me
    i would hire a man to rape you
    at least it wouldnt be me
    walk over and kiss you
    tell you i loved you
    would you believe me
    like i did you
    maybe you would enjoy the abuse
    like you made me believe
    but i cant see you
    i cant let this frustration go
    because i wont let it destroy me
    like you let it do to you




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