"I have not an Idea"..this sounds a little bit off in the stanza I had to stop here and realized it kinda distorts the flow. with the short lines, I have no problem with the length of the poem..
glad to have stopped here..
Well, I think it started off as a love poem but didn't quite make it to the end anyway.
the part that was love poem was nice soft and beautifully written like a good love poem should but it slipped into something more heavy and kinda dragged the poem down, I liked the second part the poem changed into as a seperate entity as it should be, however, it did run together.