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    dots Submission Name: The Many Voices of The Winddots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    The Many Voices of The Wind

    Whispered it
    Through fencing creek
    The work of a thousand sighs
    Speak on branch tip

    She rests her hush
    By bladed grass
    Soft as rattled tambourines
    Prance in her leaves

    Ah but she howls !
    The shrieking crevice
    Blown force she crashes
    As cold as knives

    And kisses she on cheeks
    With wayward caresses
    Convoluted voices
    Roll in the waves of her laughter

    Nods all the flowers to a lullaby
    Humming on wings
    As she passes by
    In silent dreamy poetry

    Ruffled up in skirts and clouds
    Giggling in the breadth of heaven
    Yet she will moan aloud
    Through tombs and dungeon

    Tip toed from your breathing
    Stirred by a butterflies wing
    The great wind hurricane
    Comes calling


    Inspired by Christie Moses for The Many Voices of The Wind contest.









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