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    dots Submission Name: Filled By Nothingdots

    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       yep. looking back, i'm glad it's over. I forced myself to love someone, and it ended badly.

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    dotsFilled By Nothingdots

    That was nothing but a disaster,
    Never have I been so glad,
    What a convicted fate,
    As long as it stays over.

    I tried to be something I wasnít,
    Tried to feel something unreal,
    It just wasnít there,
    I should have known heíd be no different.

    Iím so glad I donít have to feel guilty
    For something I didnít do,
    So glad I never have to deal
    With his crap ever again.

    I never thought I could ever be happy
    About a relationship ending,
    But now that I look back,
    I can actually breathe, relief.

    I canít believe I fell for his stupid tricks,
    His stupid words that sent me falling.
    If only I had known I was falling to my demise,
    I never would have dignified him with an answer!

    So this is our final goodbye,
    Our final parting.
    Looks like not only was love beyond us,
    So was friendship.

    Submitted on 2009-01-08 18:47:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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