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    dots Submission Name: W.I.T. - Work In Turmoildots
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    Author: bkj43
    ASL Info:    22/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    3.93 - 117/136/77
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 79
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1014



    Description:
       Wrote this after I attended a visitation for a dead cousin that I'd never met, there is a meaning in here somewhere so let me know what you think.


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    dotsW.I.T. - Work In Turmoildots
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    I crossed the threshold
    To an obvious chamber
    Breathing activity.
    We were gathered for a celebration
    Of a blessing,
    Of a friend,
    Of a companion on
    An assigned journey.

    And people buzzed about
    While the guest of honor
    Lay quietly dignified to the side;
    All I could think about
    Was how much this room was alive!

    There hung a fog
    Of a gentle roar
    That would wake the dead;
    Birthed of sharing the past that brought us here,
    Of the proof we have lived and bled.

    Quiet tears were shed
    Over the fragility of our scene,
    A lurking truth pushed down deep inside,
    The one we're afraid to face
    Yet is impossible to hide.

    And the talking never stops,
    It can't;
    Stops only to start over again,
    For if a peace were to clear the air
    The understanding of our invitation
    Might just settle in...




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