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Submission Name: life.... dots

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Author:	killer7736
Elite Ratio:	1.62 - 0/0/1
Words:	95

Class/Type:	Poetry/I am dead inside
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life.... dots

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to live is like to die another day in life to c what is going to happen and each dy i c a pill bottel and razer blades but never pop pill or cut my arm till i die. but even when i want to go and go far away from the pain, lie and abuse something is there to stop me and ever timei try to end it but i c more and more of who cares more about me and dont want me to go and never talk or say hello any more

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