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Submission Name: Caged Animal dots

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Author:	col13x
Elite Ratio:	2.26 - 119/300/559
Words:	124

Class/Type:	Poetry/Passion
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Caged Animal dots

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Caged Animal

My brooding darkness
Thinks on you today

Impatient animal
It paces my rib cage
Back and forth
Back and forth
As steady
As my heart

Your treasured image
Boils away my resolve
To unleash its blood
Animal blood
Dark
And wanting

It tore at your dress
Strips you naked

Those images I created
Of fired eyes
Rake my nails
Over you
Hungry talons of desire

Animal to devour you
Its starving burning
Appeased by each and every mouthful
Its strength overwhelming
Pins you
Holds you in a desperate struggle

Has you animal
Takes you animal
Lusts animal
Loves animal
Paces my rib cage
Back and forth
Back and forth
As steadily
As my heart

Submitted on 2009-01-09 16:54:49 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This poem is a turn on for all senses. I loved everything about the, there's nothing gentle about this desire, as the previous comment was made I feel it is also my opinion this is the very meaning of lust. "Animal" Thanks for sharing I absolutely loved this!

Cait
| Posted on 2009-01-11 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]
Now I am astounded that no one else has commented on this. My new favorite. I have nothing at all to say about it besides damn, to describe lust in such a way has always escaped me. My eyes are like a cm wider afer reading this lol. I really liked it in short.
| Posted on 2009-01-10 00:00:00 | by SDodson | [ Reply to This ]

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