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    dots Submission Name: Hard Lines ( The Final Solution ) Forgottendots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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       In recent days The Pope likened The Gaza Strip to a concentration camp.

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    dotsHard Lines ( The Final Solution ) Forgottendots

    Hard Lines ( The Final Solution ) Forgotten

    5 million 933 thousand 900 hundred Jewish people
    The Holocaust
    Of Buchenwald, Dachau, Auschwitz, Dzierzazna and Litzmannstadt
    So many names
    Of places of horror
    And horror filled faces

    The world still whispers with
    These sickening memories
    Of emaciated bodies
    Piled in gas chamber graves

    Survivors still carry their tattooed numbers
    But so few of them now
    Left that remember
    The persecution camps

    Now the children of these dead
    Unleash their own bedlam
    A new horror of death and blood
    A new Pogrom
    A new horror for screaming children
    To witness

    The suffering of
    5 million 993 thousand 900 hundred people
    In the wake of Israelís expansionism
    Killing and death
    Has become common to them

    5 million 993 thousand 900 hundred dead Jewish people
    Wanted life
    Wished they could live
    Loved their lives
    Their husbands, their daughters, their sons, their wives
    And only desired peace

    Concentration camp Gaza
    Belittles the sacrifice of so many ruined lives
    And adds to the stain of the murdered
    The numbers of the innocent

    And for pityís sake the world mourned the fallen of Israel
    But now
    What conscience is there
    What respect or care
    Is there
    For the 5 million 993 thousand 900 hundred
    The Star of David
    Has become nothing more than a Swastika
    To the Palestinians of Gaza

    Shame on you Israel
    Shame on you

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