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    dots Submission Name: Way By The Starsdots
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    Author: stormybluerose
    ASL Info:    17, f, somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 20/17/19
    Words: 352
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 103
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 2372



    Description:
       This was really random..
    we dont know what it's about
    if can't understand it
    make it up,
    we did too


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    dotsWay By The Starsdots
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    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    red and black
    kaylas fat
    beaten up again

    the pies can fly
    pigs will die
    people hide

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    Rebock will be Dominos
    the phone will ring.. hi
    everybody lies

    we put the fun in funeral
    and the laughter in slaughter
    in both which people die

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    the fun is in disfuntual
    my ma is in the mafia
    the scisors are in the fridge

    brothers call their dads babes
    and moms will be called guys
    homos take over the world

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    the battery will die
    we will eat in the flying pie
    in the magic meadow

    trophies for eating ham
    we will get random spam
    it's not that delicious

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    i just realized i don't care
    that i broke my funny hair
    or the nasty nacta pear

    the Z is shining bright
    the choo choo shoe will take flight
    and the minutes will go by

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    rugrats will be racing
    the new call mesage is waiting
    rugrats want to say hi

    we tease the emos about the pie
    that tasted like a chicken tie
    only edward will not die

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    alberto and mike freak out
    when the mafia takes them out
    the FBI will pout

    my coke baby will break
    and will fall into the lake
    and we'll put it in the easy bake

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    handy swiches will flicker
    and scare away the fox
    when he gets the chicken pox

    antidisashiblementarianisim will mean nothing
    in the baskin robins commertial anymore
    the puppies will read the dictiornary more

    up there
    over juipter
    way by the stars

    YAY







    Submitted on 2009-01-10 01:13:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      WOW! *FAVORITED*
    This is [censored] awesome!
    [censored] understanding it.
    I am a person of simple mind,
    I like the badada beat and the repetition.
    !!!Repetition!!!
    Yea, so this is [censored] great, [censored] everyone and their ohhhh my dog died bull[censored] poetry, this is [censored] great, welcome back stoner nonsense poetry!!!



    YES!
    *arm thrust motion*

    -eggshells-
    | Posted on 2009-01-11 00:00:00 | by eggshells | [ Reply to This ]
      ... I so need to get high to understand this at all... like really... I need some good weed or some crack or some heroin... I just don't understand anything... but it was funny in some parts... I laughed and since it was comedy I can say you got that part down... very hyped up and everything... now Im craving drugs...

    Thanks for the laugh

    J.J.O.C
    | Posted on 2009-01-10 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very interesting. I think I could actually understand a bit at the beginning,
    'Rebock will be Dominos,
    the phone will ring...hi
    everybody lies'
    and perhaps not all of it was on Jupiter...(or this IS Jupiter...) anyhow it was very expressive. The ending was a bit of a cliff drop, and the lines got longer and longer after starting short, however, but thank you for making me smile at this strange piece. (Perhaps you should have less coffee tomorrow morning?)
    lol, thanks for sharing,
    dancer
    | Posted on 2009-01-10 00:00:00 | by dancer-of-words | [ Reply to This ]


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