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Author: runedot
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I just wrote, after the second paragraph and first word of the third, I realised I started it all with It.

And hence came the title.

It really is just a ramble...


It



It came to be, that the world stormed and the seas rumbled, the sun reflected the light of the moon, and man gave birth to newborns...
It is in this world, there came to be one who was not strictly natural, one who was different in all possible ways imaginable, one who shall be named, BOOHAH.
It seemed that the existence of BOOHAH was an impossibility, and yet that the statement that it was impossible was in fact impossible as BOOHAH indeed existed.
It was, then, at this point in time, that BOOHAH came into awareness, and was, for the first time, intelligent...
It was... unlike anything the world has ever seen, or will see, or has seen... BOOHAH never reached the world of man, or at least the world of man as we know it, and thus was never seen.
It was, powerful, not in the physical, mental, or supernatural sense, but it's stench and aroma was powerful, so much so that all mannerisms of creatures perished under BOOHAH's stench.
It is in the same world of existence as BOOHAH, that another, MEH came into existence.
It was a creature of old, gigantic in size, yet small in brain, a brute of physical prowess and mental weakness.
It had a companion... Its companion was PKEH, one opposite to MEH, yet equal.
It was an entity of new, small in size, yet great in brain, a smart-ass of erudite mind and retarded physical ability.
It came to pass that the alliance of MEH and PKEH assaulted the firm grip of BOOHAH, the battle raged, however, MEH and PKEH could not hold their breath forever, and their alliance perished, BOOHAH had won.
It was not however, BOOHAH that was ultimate; while BOOHAH ruled with an iron fist that emitted massive amounts of lethal odour, there was another.
It seemed BOOHAH had a contender, and this contender was not a primitive creation of a perverted world, it was MAN as it once was, and soon shall be once more.
It was MAN that was ultimate, and it was MAN that ruled, not with an iron fist, but with a virtual one.
It came to pass that MAN's prowess in virtual reality, overpowered the odour of BOOHAH, and then was MAN truly ultimate.
It came to be, that the world rumbled and the seas stormed, the sun emitted glorious light which was in turn reflected by the moon, and where woman gave birth to children of the ultimate, MAN.




Submitted on 2004-07-12 00:22:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ummm...Ok...I didn't quite follow this at all...I sort of got the general idea but if you could get back to me with what it was meant to be I would be very grateful because I know that you said that it is just a ramble but there has to be some sort of idea to it and I am confused. Sorry this may just be me being an idiot but never mind!
| Posted on 2004-08-27 00:00:00 | by selfbetrayal | [ Reply to This ]
  i am not sure what to think of this what my opinion is is that in my mind i have no [censored] cule what i just read but i liked the way it sounded as it slipped from my tongue
| Posted on 2004-07-12 00:00:00 | by PoetryQueen | [ Reply to This ]
  I have no [censored]clue what this is/was about.t seems like its all just jumbledtogethe. But I did like the "Boohahs They were differnet. Ws this intended to be a rap? Please let me know.
| Posted on 2004-07-12 00:00:00 | by Emmalee | [ Reply to This ]
  This is bizarre. Stench is physical. If meh is really old it makes no sense to talk about when he came into existence. You might also want to give Boohah a better poower than flatuelence - and a better name while ur at it.
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| Posted on 2004-07-12 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]


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