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    dots Submission Name: This Power, This Ferality, Is Nightdots
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    Author: Shadowstar13
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 191/191/129
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsThis Power, This Ferality, Is Nightdots
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    (This)

    The darkness of this world has gathered together
    Coagulating like the blackest of blood
    Abandoned by stars, leaving only the ether
    Of the everlasting blackness of wild Hecate's brood

    (Power)

    The pale, eerie body of quicksilver light
    Glowing like the coldest of silver disks
    Is the only candle to guide my gaze this night
    This night of birds and basilisks

    (This)

    Beauty unsurpassed by that begat by man
    In this smoldering cauldron of darkness and moon
    Power not known since thoughts first began
    Surreality not known before nor to be known soon

    (Ferality)

    Why wouldn't the ancients name the light of the mother?
    Danu, Artemis, Selene, she has been called
    Surpassed only in sheer brilliance by her brother
    Yet beneath her it seems that all time has been stalled

    (This)

    This sable sister, this utter dark cloak
    Which it suits mankind to call "night"
    Long has been seen by humanfolk
    As a terror, a plague, a horror, a blight
    "Holy men" have likened its darkness to evil
    A harbinger and hider of vile creatures and
    doom
    An ancient metaphor for the doers of ill
    How dare they who walk in "the light" assume?

    (Is)

    In this feral, powerful world beneath the night's wings
    Dark euphoria and exhilaration reign
    The heartbeat of the earth below my feet sings
    Tearing away heartbreak and pain

    (Night)

    The darkness of this world has gathered together
    Coagulating like the blackest of blood
    Abandoned by stars, leaving only the ether
    Of the everlasting blackness of wild Hecate's brood




    Submitted on 2009-01-11 21:24:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love Nature poem but this is not what I suspected when I clicked on it to read. It's much better. I love the format you used to write it especially. I would call it exactly what you have written though This Power, This Ferality, This is Night. Lovely write hun. Keep em coming.

    -Sarah
    | Posted on 2009-01-12 00:00:00 | by SDodson | [ Reply to This ]


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