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    dots Submission Name: Before She Lives to See Another Daydots
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    Author: SDodson
    ASL Info:    18/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 35/22/21
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 738
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 497



    Description:
       Some days I hate men. Especially my own.


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    dotsBefore She Lives to See Another Daydots
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    Bound and gaged
    Push her forward
    Eyes tight shut
    Feel her feet on the pavement
    Stumble
    Rough stone grates the skin
    Hurry with the execution
    So this can begin again
    Hands released
    To be tied without remorse
    Wooden
    Stiff
    Standing tall
    This woman can never fall
    Prisoner
    Held captive
    Set the fire quick
    Now run away
    Burn her fast
    Before she lives to see another day




    Submitted on 2009-01-12 00:08:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I sympathize. There are many days when I'd rather not bother with men. My favorite lines are "Stumble/Rough stones grate the skin/Hurry with the execution", mainly because they seem to go "trippingly on the tongue", as Hamlet said. You kept to some kind of meter pretty consistently, and as always your grammar/spelling was impeccable. I hope your relationship rights itself.

    Best of luck,

    DW
    | Posted on 2009-01-12 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]


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