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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots
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    Author: haileebobailee
    ASL Info:    18/F/NV
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 30/41/15
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLifedots
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    Lets play make believe,
    and spread our love
    on red Valentine walls.

    Pour our souls
    into empty glass jars
    and run down never-ending
    roads.

    Lets be real,
    tell the truth through tears,
    stop when it gets too hard,
    and laugh at bad hair days.

    Lets lie,
    through our teeth
    during dinner dates in candlelight.

    Stretch the truth
    on our wedding day
    and promise forever,
    when what we really mean is for now.

    Lets change,
    becoming the people
    we want to be,
    chasing after success
    and refusing failure

    Realizing we have regrets
    and memories
    we want to forget.

    Lets live…




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