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    dots Submission Name: Ataraxia dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Ataraxia

    Ah !
    Peace
    Peace apart from all the other wishings
    For it
    And other dreams
    For the world
    To be set
    Within its balm

    Peace
    Would be known
    If she were not so denied
    By those who cannot spell out
    Her sanctuary
    Or rest from her a single syllable
    For themselves

    Peace
    Apart from all the other wishing
    Would be
    To sit without words
    Listening to the voice of the world
    Next to her
    Peace indeed
    Found in unflinching eyes
    And open hearts

    Ah !
    Peace
    Apart from all the other worldly wishings
    And other dreams
    For the hearts of humans
    To be set within
    Its balm

    Would be an eternal day
    Of loving
    Made whole by joining hands
    Would span continents and oceans
    But separate every grain of sand
    To be held up in their glory

    Peace indeed never to leave
    But rest evermore by her side
    And think on even the slightest thing
    Of making her smile
    What peace more
    Could I ask for











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      Ataraxia
    I am a firm believer in asking when I don't understand something and this is one of those times. If you could please tell me what this word means I would be grateful.
    And of course another lovely write. Nothing to say here, nothing to add, your words are beautiful as always.

    -Sarah
    | Posted on 2009-01-13 00:00:00 | by SDodson | [ Reply to This ]


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