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    Author: LebanesePoet22
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    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Play the game right or don't play at all, bring the race together or you'll start to fall. Don't fear the color, just fear yourself form stopping the ones that are just tring to help. Black, white, mexican, or other, they're just your friends and friends to eachother. No slaves, no prisoners, no rich , no poor, we're all the same, just the same, and maybe even more. Be free, be loud, be yourself, and be proud. No fame, no hate, just nice, and not fate. Laugh together, laugh out loud, laugh when no one is even around. Be together, be free, be with anyone you want to be. Make it happin, make it right, make this hate run at night.




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