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    dots Submission Name: My Lady Speaksdots
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    Author: SDodson
    ASL Info:    18/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 35/22/21
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       I don't know, just got swept away in my own quiet and listened to what was going on around me. I heard the most beautiful woman; night. I love all the sounds, when everything is let loose. Nothing could explain that I don't think. I definately meant to make her sound aggressive though, by painting a picture of the sun so don't bombard me with comments saying that I contradicted myself. In the ghetto any sounds you hear are aggressive until the sun comes up. Enjoy.


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    dotsMy Lady Speaksdots
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    Do you hear her?
    Her words so shallow, so deep
    Do you hear her?
    When she speaks
    Low and sensual
    Then to climax when it's said and done
    Do you hear her?
    She speaks like the sun
    High and mighty
    Resonating every pore of every body
    Burning away at the atmosphere around her
    Do you Hear her?
    Do you really hear her when she speaks?
    When her beautiful pitch slowly peaks
    In anger
    In angst
    In love
    In passion
    The stars can't hold a candle
    To the brightness of her voice
    Queen of all airwaves
    To not hear her is a lonely choice
    Whether caged or free
    I wouldn't care
    Just so long as she speaks to me
    Screams at me
    Sings to me
    Whispers in my ear
    The voice of an angel
    Wipes away any fear
    Do you hear her?
    Shutup, don't make a sound
    Like the wings of a butterfly
    Humming so slight
    Listen to the whispers
    Lighten the night
    Do you hear that?
    That song on the wind
    Do you hear her?
    The siren of more than men
    Coax her slowly
    With the absense of your own speech
    You'll hear her
    This I whole heartedly preach




    Submitted on 2009-01-13 00:56:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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