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    dots Submission Name: Today I realizeddots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 262/263/207
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 791



    Description:
       Not finished, but i needed to get this up now.

    Dedication: Chris Lynch


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    dotsToday I realizeddots
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    Today I woke up and
    I didn't think about you.
    I didn't cry myself to sleep
    And was happy for once too.
    I walked around today with
    A smile on my face.
    As I thought about the one
    I wanted in your place.
    For once I didn't have
    To feel a hole in my heart.
    This was the first time
    Since we have been apart.

    Today I realized
    I can live without you.
    Today I realized
    I can live the way you do.
    To live and not care
    About how it use to be.
    Today I realized
    It don't have to be you and me.

    Today I woke up and
    Had someone else on my mind
    I was thinking of someone
    That I hope I could call mine.




    Submitted on 2009-01-14 05:45:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      AAWWW! it's so corny, but i ADORE it! lol And its so true. I especially like the line, "Today I realized
    It don't have to be you and me". You did a great job. I'd love to hear more.
    | Posted on 2009-01-14 00:00:00 | by xxtink0228xx | [ Reply to This ]


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