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    dots Submission Name: Three a.mdots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 262/263/207
    Words: 281
    Class/Type: Lyrics/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 81
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1644



    Description:
       Well I have a song called 5 a.m., why not 3 a.m.?

    Dedication: Devin Michael Green


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    dotsThree a.mdots
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    Three a.m. and I'm thinking with nothing to do
    Wondering why I can't stop thinking of you.
    How can I just be friends if I can't get you out my mind.
    I try distractions to stop you from being in my head.
    Trying to forget all the words that you said.
    But the distraction I search for is so hard to find.

    I try over and over
    To get on with my life.
    But it don't seem like you're gonna let me.
    I deal with the pain
    Left in my head.
    And leave it there hoping you won't see.

    And I'm up at 3 in the morning
    And I want to leave you behind.
    But these nights are killing me
    With the thoughts that run in my mind,
    Because I love you.
    Because I love you.

    Three a.m. and I can't sleep, thinking about you.
    For some reason I hope you're thinking of me too.
    But my wish is pointless but I still hope that you are.
    And I hate the way you make me feel inside
    Every time when I go there to hide.
    You have so much power over me even though you’re so far

    I try over and over
    To get on with my life.
    But it don't seem like you're gonna let me.
    I deal with the pain
    Left in my head.
    And leave it there hoping you won't see.

    And I'm up at 3 in the morning
    And I want to leave you behind.
    But these nights are killing me
    With the thoughts that run in my mind,
    Because I love you.
    Because I love you.





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    ||| Comments |||
      Studies have shown that infatuation is not love an even if it were it soonly dies because it is not built on a lasting foundation of seeing the person within instead of looking at the cuteness. But as this is meant to be a song then perhaps anything goes.
    | Posted on 2009-01-14 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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