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    dots Submission Name: Man and beastdots
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    Author: H.Redd
    ASL Info:    28/m/ lake charles
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 37/42/65
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 82
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       love and fears


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    dotsMan and beastdots
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    I am man eating machine! How these sorrows of the night evoke in horror to the soul forever cold.
    Gray mind, in the Red hours her flush is kind.
    The last spark on the open sea, if these dreams wasn't real, if only the heart of rage could not no longer feel.
    These are the sad words of alone to doom by fears from the Lycan songs!




    Submitted on 2009-01-16 09:07:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow that is a really good poem. It has a lot of meaning to it. It makes you want to read it twice.
    | Posted on 2009-01-16 00:00:00 | by phoenixtale | [ Reply to This ]


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