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    dots Submission Name: the good and the baddots

    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 722
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1223


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    dotsthe good and the baddots

    the smile on your face
    the light in your eyes
    its everything you do
    that makes me loose my mind
    the touch of your hand
    so gently across my face
    its these little feelings
    nobody can replace

    the hate in your eyes
    when i do something wrong
    those angry fists
    that prove im not strong
    the words you say
    that break me down
    watching you walk away
    watching me drown

    your love is amazing
    it lights up my life
    from your hugs to your kiss
    and your breath taking smile
    from your warmth or ur hugs
    to the touch or yours hands
    its these little reasons
    that make you my man

    they way i disappoint you
    when im never good enough
    they way i dont match up
    to everyone
    im different im unique
    i guess im just me
    maybe one day
    you will really see

    the girl in your arms
    will be there forever
    no matter how bad
    times are together
    we should just take
    the good with the bad
    cause one day you'll see
    im all you have

    Submitted on 2009-01-16 12:06:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      all i can say is WOW... pretty gud...
    | Posted on 2009-01-19 00:00:00 | by LuckyCharmz | [ Reply to This ]
      wow that was a beautiful poems. I thought it was perfect length. Its great because its you. :)
    | Posted on 2009-01-16 00:00:00 | by phoenixtale | [ Reply to This ]

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