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internal inspection


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 59
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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internal inspection


So unsure,
Very unsteady,
Still unaware
if i am ready.
You seem like
You are closed,
My soul bare-
Every flaw exposed.
Still not knowing
if i am real,
or if i even
Really feel.
miniscule and
Parasitic,
inward and outward
only a mimic.
Still wondering
If i am real,
or if i even
Want to feel.




Submitted on 2009-01-16 20:03:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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