internal inspection

Author: Voodoo_Lounge ASL Info:    21/F/OH Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171 Words: 59

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internal inspection

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So unsure, Very unsteady, Still unaware if i am ready. You seem like You are closed, My soul bare- Every flaw exposed. Still not knowing if i am real, or if i even Really feel. miniscule and Parasitic, inward and outward only a mimic. Still wondering If i am real, or if i even Want to feel.

Submitted on 2009-01-16 20:03:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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