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Author: LucyDiamond
ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 365 /575 /251
Words: 174
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I seem to be
chronic disease
and I utilize direct battle strategy—
I infect through the mind.



The mind is not immune to the jarring bite,
nor the lure of sensuous night
that I can dig into your skin—I

will always win. I
am inescapable sin—

Lilith comes to life.

“And once I am beating through
the body’s brain
I can begin to inspire
a dark moon pain.

“I want you to
make rough magic love to me
like the world is on the brink of extinction
and it’s the last morsel of passion
humanity will ever know.

“Let it really show.
Swallow me whole, with something raw
to wash me down.
Don’t make
a sound
unless it’s you verbalizing angst
from the back of your throat.“

Then Lilith, be a woman

and take it all away.

Submitted on 2009-01-17 02:43:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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