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Catacomb


Author: LucyDiamond
ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
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Words: 117
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Catacomb



I have been walking through
an underground tomb
for years and years.
It’s nothing new—
I’ve been to a few
in my time but I’ve learned
to call this one home.
Thanks to you, I’m no longer alone
day to next dark day—
I have you to lead the way.
From tomb to tomb we stalk,
arm in arm we will walk
through the crowded cemetery—
it’s our lair, our library—
our prized possession,
our sanctuary.

I wait for the day I depart
and become envied bone.
But I don’t want you to be alone—
won’t you, dearest,
follow me home?





Submitted on 2009-01-17 02:44:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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