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I like to read your poems because they remind me of my own and I take comfort that I’m not alone. I think you’re weird and I like it when you try to grow your beard out and then shave it again, and again. I like it when you lock the door— it lets me know there will be lots, lots more. I like to hold your hand on walks at night where we improvise and watch owners fuck their cars and we smoke cheap cigars. I like it when you kiss my neck and my lips, my shoulder, and I like it when our shirts come off and you look so happy in the darkness. Blindness—? I am not alone, I am not alone, I am not alone. And I won’t be alone, I pray— promise you’ll be there to kiss me on Sunday. |
Oooh. So hot. Hahaha. I really liked reading this. Hmmm...I miss a certain person right now. I love the natural way some of the lines rhymed. Ahh...you naughty girl. | Posted on 2009-04-24 00:00:00 | by Suven7 | [ Reply to This ] | I liked it. It's cute in a good way because it's straightforward and there's a nice sincerity to that which rings true. | | Posted on 2009-01-22 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ] | Its very beautifull... | Honestly -Craig | Posted on 2009-01-17 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ] | |