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    dots Submission Name: Syn Dulcisdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio State
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 174/189/127
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 96
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    Bytes: 546



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    dotsSyn Dulcisdots
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    Felicity sugar raw from the oblong fruit:
    Miracles from base miraculin.
    Lemon zest and rasp and tart
    are all for lack of better terms
    a dead taste or a lack of sense
    where sense should be already.
    A tongued trip to sanguine sweet
    ambrosia in its mortal shell:
    A treat reserved for savoring.
    Deception in form of taste reform
    defining new from the familiar
    and true appreciation
    sensation worn well with
    an expansion of the pallet.

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    Submitted on 2009-01-18 06:41:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You were right I do like this, the creative process unfolds in a very attractive way for this piece. Spoken aloud I feel it could be very powerful, tell me what did you intend for it?
    | Posted on 2009-01-19 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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