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If I Walked Off the Edge

Author: Metalman
ASL Info:    18/M/TX
Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 5 /5 /5
Words: 292
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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If I Walked Off the Edge

If i walked off the edge
would you be there to catch me
if i lost my head
would you be there to guide me
if i sold my soul
would you repent me
if i was buried in gold
would you open my eyes to reality
"cause i put my trust in you
to love me and embrace me like i
want you to
i put my trust in you
to be there for me
even when i don't want you to"
i've been close to fallin
and i've been close to you
i wish i didn't remember all
the hell that i've been through
now don't get it twisted cause
i'm a thankful man
if i didn't go through things
i've been through i wouldn't
be who i am
"so i put my trust in you
to put your trust in me
to love you and embrace you
like you need to be
i put my trust in you
to see i'm a different man
i put my trust in you to look
and find who i am"
all i know is what i've been told
and all i've seen is the blistering cold
so i open my eyes and take a deep breath
remember the past and hold up my head
"cause i know you put your trust in me
to be who i wanna be
but still to remain true
to the one who made me see
to live and to die with no regrets
with your love wrapped around my heart
and teachings in my head
so put your trust in me
for i will not fail
i'll be with you to the end
ths i will prevail"

Submitted on 2009-01-20 06:09:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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