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    dots Submission Name: Inaugurationdots
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    Author: mae
    Elite Ratio:    5.97 - 596/642/259
    Words: 88
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    Humanity's river crested at flood
    and poured across the mall,
    breaching dikes of color
    and levees of class
    to hear again the call;
    to listen to speeches,
    hearts stirred by song;
    to seek the promise
    and claim the gift
    we've wanted all along.

    We've Another Chance
    to be the world's good guy.
    We've Another Chance
    freedom's song to amplify.
    We've Another Chance
    to look brutality in the eye.
    We've Another Chance.
    Don't let it pass by.

    We've Another Chance.









    Submitted on 2009-01-20 20:38:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I would definitely send this to President O'Bama. He may need this take from a poet to brighten his days ahead. It is very well executed. The metaphors (or should I say allegories) are concise and quite meaningful. I like how you repeat,"We've another Chance," as if to say much correction is to be done and O'Bama is the one.
    | Posted on 2009-01-21 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      YAY! Inauguration poetry? What is this!? Gosh, I want to write one! Seriously, I am like... in love with this.

    First off, I love anything relating to politics. And I love our 44th President. But this poem was also extremely well-executed. Your vocabulary is wonderful, and it flows beautiful at the same time.

    Very nice writing. I think I might have to check out more of your stuff.

    >Pathways<
    | Posted on 2009-01-21 00:00:00 | by Crimsonpathways | [ Reply to This ]



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