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    dots Submission Name: Uninhibiteddots
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    Author: Twin_Snakes
    ASL Info:    22/M/ O.O
    Elite Ratio:    4.99 - 32/20/11
    Words: 255
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1858



    Description:
       haha. A collaboration between Draumrkopa and I. I came up with the title, and we just went and wrote our seperate pieces, fun to see how one person takes it compared to the other. Btw, mine is first, hers is second....I'll put in the titles and whatnot again just for the fucking fun of it. haha, enjoy!


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    Uninhibited by Twin_Snakes/Zach

    The gravel beneath my feet crunches like glass
    As I walk along the parched highway
    The one that leads to the city in my head
    From a distance it seems...
    Uninhibited
    Lifeless
    Of all thought and emotion
    I glance up
    At the crackling silver sky
    And realize
    How can I see the meaning of life
    And all at once the clouds part
    The city shines
    The world unwinds inside of me
    But I'm feeling a bit disconnected
    Still stumbling
    But I'll drag on forward
    Revealing who I am
    Like in times or warped memories
    I reach out
    But you distance yourself from me
    So I shoulder your burdens
    Refilling that uninhibited void
    Injured with pain and sadness
    We finally reveal ourselves
    Slowly disappearing
    Looking for that freedom underneath our beds

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    (Unin)hibited by Draumrkopa

    Feathers on a dreamcatcher
    My hair blowing in the wind
    Catching a good one
    And finding a perfectly red strand
    Finding myself hibited
    When will I be unin?
    Something's holding me back
    May just be myself
    Who knows?
    I do.
    It is me.
    I am my own worst enemy.
    Coming up with a plan.
    Let me push forward
    Otherwise,
    I'll be here forever.
    Just stuck.
    Ineffective thoughts,
    Getting me nowhere.
    (Stuck) staring at a white room
    With blank walls
    Need to paint it with ideas, growth,
    What my eyes see.
    My future.
    Music and words,
    (All I can see.)
    But, yup, there definitely is a future there
    I will make it so.




    Submitted on 2009-01-21 15:13:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok i'd just thought i'd add this to my page as wel since i wrote some of it and idk if Duv/Meg still comes here or how often...but i see she ahsn't written anything in awhile which saddens me :(
    | Posted on 2009-01-21 00:00:00 | by Twin_Snakes | [ Reply to This ]



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