Description: The 13th Tribe is a mysterious addition to the 12 Tribes of Israel - of Lost Souls.
Boulevard of Broken Dreams. -------------------------------------------
Boulevard of Broken Dreams.
Walking the Lanes of Memories
Faintly tainted with Nostalgia
Brittle as Winter’s Mourning Bane.
Old discarded bulletins litter Financial Halls Broad Walks
Sharing Faded yellowing Pages of God’s Word
A Silenced Voice Long Gone.
A “Mindless Wind” shrouded in Mysteries
Tiredly finding its way down Corridors
spilling down empty passageways
shattered tainted widows.
Lingering on Lifeless Terraces
Miserable Wailing Betwixt it All.
Haunting fingers rustling through faded I.O.U useless Promises
Dimly reflecting its once merry tidings
Bygone birthdays, forlorn get well soon, forgotten remember me?
Now empty places and empty spaces.
“Wisps of the Winds”
Cascading visions filled with Fading Countenances
A Kaleidoscope of Broken Dreams.
“A Stale Wind” touching “Memory Lane”
Silent Shadows once Aflame with Wonder
A Candle Flame Flickers!
“Winds of Prosperity” now “Broken Squall’s of Promises”
“Fathers of Fore bearers”
A “Bastard`s Inn”
A Shameless Progeny.
Ancient Eden along Tainted Path Ways
Scouring the Precipices of the Abyss!
Searching the Lost Souls
Soiled Blood-soaked Holy Banners of Honour.
“A Wind Recalls” Yesteryears Hopes
Bonded with Today’s Sorrows
Lamenting the Tomorrows
This God’s “Wind” His People This 13th Tribe
Hi I reread your comms on Doulevard of broken dreams 29.01.2009
And even now must say that it was a marvelous piece of poetry.
I dont know if I commented on it but the 13thTribe in my religion is the Jews from Esau that is The Edomites.
Apart from that the poem is brilliant and most inspireing.
You've put a lot of ump into this piece. Beautifully done! Allow me to write the following .
Ah, such a beautiful person
wanting to beautiful something not beautiful .
He came from far away
to teach the unbeautiful
how to be beautiful .
He gave them a hoe
to grow some beautiful seed .
The 13th tribe thought they more beautiful
than the Beautiful Servant come.
The 13th tribe in a slautering spoof
got rid of this more beautiful than they
(or so they thought)
Now this more Beautiful One
became more beautiful than before
giving more beauty to the 13th tribe
(to all who would) if they but sit
in His salon to dry their tangled hair.