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new song

Author: Jazzy
ASL Info:    20/f/USA
Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 90 /221 /227
Words: 192
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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new song

Oh my, you've come through and... changed
Everything. It all seems to me as some kind of puzzle, I just can't seem to make any sense of it. Of anything. I just can't see through you, I just can't understand you,
Why you've done this to me.

Get out of my head,
Because you have ruined
Everything that I am
Everything that I am
Just break down that wall
You built around me.

I just can't seem to be able to put
Those pieces together.
Why do you even care to come into my life
And to do this to me. Like changing everything
That matters to you.

Get out of my head
Because you have ruined
Everything that I am
Everything that I am
Just break down the wall that
You built around me.

I've realized, I've realized
That you don't control who I am
Or who I'm going to become.

I can love again
I can care again
I can feel again

I can breathe
I can think
and you
aren't there

But I still love you

Submitted on 2009-01-21 16:58:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a real good lyrical. And I appreciate the posting of it. It's actually one that tells people that though they can't figure out another, doesn't mean they can't figure out themselves you know? Good write. I enjoyed it.

| Posted on 2009-01-22 00:00:00 | by unnamedtear | [ Reply to This ]

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