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    dots Submission Name: Spilled Symphony (Beta Version)dots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 653
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 459



    Description:
       An idea I'm working on.... if anyone wants to turn this into a collab... i think we could work on it. this is only a beta.... so who ever is ready.... com'n.


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    dotsSpilled Symphony (Beta Version)dots
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    i'm undefeated
    but seedless in deeds.
    I'm on my own 2 feet,
    but still weak in the knees
    it's like a home team sweep,
    see, i know my disease
    but still speak of the need...

    I cave in
    when the pressure's really on
    I I I I
    like Christina Milian
    I I I I
    got this one thing tripping me
    so i spill my heart
    in another spilled symphony......




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