Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Alexandradots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: JoshusDog
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 529
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1398



    Description:
       This is poem I wrote as a gift to a girl I was involved with. I thought it was quality work, so I preserved it for posterity sake.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsAlexandradots
    -------------------------------------------





    Soulful deep

    Blue eyes.

    Haunting

    Dream of

    Beauty

    In black

    Lace.

    Vision

    Of red

    Fire

    Ananda

    Passion.

    Following

    Wild lust

    Urge.

    Rising

    Crescendo of

    Pleasure

    Pain dichotomy.

    Tender

    Gentle laugh

    Melodic purring

    And

    Inticing

    Words begging

    For sweet

    Submission.

    Moaning

    Delicious noises

    Soft

    Fair flesh

    Quivering

    For caress .

    Trembling

    In

    Eternal

    Moment.

    Shared

    Hot

    Experiences

    Giving

    Completely.

    Losing self

    Conditioning

    In waves

    Of

    Consumation

    Realized.

    Shining

    Beautiful

    Star

    Consuming

    Me

    Whole




    Submitted on 2009-01-23 18:00:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    untitled written by ShyOne
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Love written by saartha
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Redemption written by poetotoe
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to two comments without commenting.