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    dots Submission Name: Alexandradots
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    Author: JoshusDog
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 559
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This is poem I wrote as a gift to a girl I was involved with. I thought it was quality work, so I preserved it for posterity sake.


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    dotsAlexandradots
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    Soulful deep

    Blue eyes.

    Haunting

    Dream of

    Beauty

    In black

    Lace.

    Vision

    Of red

    Fire

    Ananda

    Passion.

    Following

    Wild lust

    Urge.

    Rising

    Crescendo of

    Pleasure

    Pain dichotomy.

    Tender

    Gentle laugh

    Melodic purring

    And

    Inticing

    Words begging

    For sweet

    Submission.

    Moaning

    Delicious noises

    Soft

    Fair flesh

    Quivering

    For caress .

    Trembling

    In

    Eternal

    Moment.

    Shared

    Hot

    Experiences

    Giving

    Completely.

    Losing self

    Conditioning

    In waves

    Of

    Consumation

    Realized.

    Shining

    Beautiful

    Star

    Consuming

    Me

    Whole




    Submitted on 2009-01-23 18:00:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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