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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    23/F/WV!!
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 1001/1073/242
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I'm finally moving out of this god-forsaken state. I am happy, but at the same time there is a huge huge amount of scared lodged in the little area that my heart sits. Its 7 days today before I am finally gone from texas and start my New Life in West Virginia. I'm not going to miss anything here, exactly, except maybe for the familiarity, I haven't lived very many other places, and this is...eerie. I hope that I'm not so out of place there, and I hope that everyone there doesn't take an immediate disliking to me. I know this may better fit a journal entry, but I felt like making it a post, since I will be gone a month, maybe two.




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      I'm sorry to hear your moving,
    I felt scared [censored]less when i moved from London to some hole in the middle of no where.
    I lost all my friend and had trouble making new ones.
    Your biggest problem will be thinking about your old life and what you will be doing if you still lived there.

    But a big move also gives you the chance to be someone else instead of the old you from Texas.

    Good luck and nice writing
    kellz
    | Posted on 2009-01-24 00:00:00 | by kellz | [ Reply to This ]


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