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    dots Submission Name: 21' X 10' Jaildots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 614
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1012



    Description:
       Life in my dorm room.


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    dots21' X 10' Jaildots
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    Trapped in a room,
    Never seeing the daylight,
    Never hearing the wonders of nature,
    Always fearful of what could come in,
    Always happy to sleep away the pain.
    Entering a whirlwind of emotions,
    Whenever they are outside,
    They linger for hours,
    Stay late into the night.
    The door is locked from the inside,
    But chained from the out,
    The windows open
    So that I could scream,
    But the screens are thicker than steel
    So the sound just bounces back,
    The walls are thin
    So every word
    Of theirs is heard,
    But thick enough
    For them to forget
    My existence within.
    There is no escape,
    No way to sneak by,
    They stare as if I
    Were an ameba.
    They control whether
    I stay or leave,
    They control whether
    I sleep or lay awake.
    Trapped,
    Held captive,
    Detained,
    Imprisoned,
    In my own room.




    Submitted on 2009-01-25 04:13:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The content is good, just work a little bit on the flow and it can be a lot better. Nice imagination though.
    | Posted on 2009-05-18 00:00:00 | by devil666 | [ Reply to This ]


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