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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts On A Busdots

    Author: Willoyd
    ASL Info:    20/m/Zim
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 3/4/6
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Something that came to mind during a roadtrip

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    dotsThoughts On A Busdots

    Famous poets come
    From broken bridges I suppose
    A dark past, broken heart
    Or a restless soul
    With their only sunshine
    Being their relentless hope
    Armed with passion
    They take out a pad
    And paint a picture of words

    Some manuevre their brush of thoughts
    On wasted dreams, fading streams
    Some a picture perfect scene
    The last remnants of what they could have been
    Some leave the canvas white
    As they believe
    To make the most impact of all
    Is to leave a blank dream

    Famous poets are all the same
    For without their stories
    They would have been of no gain
    For they learnt how to take
    The brunt of hurt and shame
    Only to inspire us to take on another day

    Submitted on 2009-01-25 12:26:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think that this poem really says a lot about poets and all of thier heart, soul, and life that goes into each piece. This is a great tribute, in a sense, to poets-hope that was some part of what you were going for.
    | Posted on 2009-01-25 00:00:00 | by ImperfectGirl1 | [ Reply to This ]

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