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can't hide


Author: teekie
ASL Info:    18/f/ma
Elite Ratio:    1.12 - 5 /27 /21
Words: 56
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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pleas comment tell me wat u think


can't hide



I see right threw you
Threw that fake smile
and sarcastic laugh
to the child who has a haunting past
you try to hide
so many do not see
the depressed child
livin in thee
but i'll lend a hand
when ever you need
your like a sister to me
but a good friend indeed




Submitted on 2009-01-25 19:33:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very well written and highly creative. The concept behind this write is very vivid and true to life.

Very well done indeed.

Frank.
| Posted on 2009-05-22 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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