Description: Just an old poem I wrote about my relationships. I always feel the need to say yes when people ask me out. But I'm never ready for a relationship and I always let them down in the end....
Just look into my eyes -------------------------------------------
In my eyes, you can see the true me
You can see the loss of hope
the pain
the screaming
oh, if only you would look into my eyes
When I look into yours, I see love
I see happiness
I know what I have, isn't what you deserve
that's why you must look into my eyes
and see the lie that is standing before you
I like this piece, kind of reminds me of myself.
If someone is interested in me I'll go along and see what they are like and then before you know it I'm in a relationship with someone new without giving myself the time to get over my last. And although i know that will all end soon because my heart isn't really in it, I seem to just go to end anyway and wait for them to end it. My eyes too, are full of pain and i understand exactly what you mean by this and I think you did very well capturing this in such a short piece.
"I know what I have, isn't what you deserve
that's why you must look into my eyes
and see the lie that is standing before you"
I really like that part.
I think you've done a great job on this piece.
It pulled me right in.
It was short but good anyways.
Good job :)
-E.R
Submission Name: Just look into my eyes
