Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: COMMITMENTdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: mae
    Elite Ratio:    5.97 - 596/642/259
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 116
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 794



    Description:
       Sometimes I feel resentful that love and passion are not all-consuming as they were when we were new.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsCOMMITMENTdots
    -------------------------------------------


    My thoughts wander at will,
    like stray sheep too close to the cliff's edge.
    I push them away from danger,
    toward the desired goal.
    It seems so simple:
    treat kindly the one I love;
    ponder the features I memorized
    long ago;
    dream of our remaining days
    as if they were our first.

    We have changed and our love as well.
    We are no longer ruled by passion
    nor pillow our heads on each other's shoulder.
    I often find my thoughts returning
    to the heat of our early golden days
    and anger and resentment
    become my afternoon companions.

    Yet, I know that all my desire
    in this life is you
    and only with you to finish it.






    Submitted on 2009-01-25 21:37:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      It all boils down to growing and evolving together, and sharing common interests.

    These are the things that help to ensure sustained togetherness.

    This is an excellent piece of writing from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-07-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.