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    dots Submission Name: Home Sweet Home dots
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    Author: JoshusDog
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
        I was working in SOC on this one. It's a commentary on the modern, hurried life.


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    dotsHome Sweet Home dots
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    Dogma Shitstains
    Streaking
    tattered carpets
    of hope and belief.
    Shitstains made
    by imperialist,
    consumerist garbage
    fed daily to
    lab mice
    consumer
    automatons
    frightened by
    lack of boundaries.
    Pretend walls
    of sensibility
    crippling
    bright eyed
    children of gods
    and money,
    machines of
    absolution, flashing
    neon lights
    leading way
    to grave.
    Inconsequence,
    rule of day.
    Hunting
    for good will.
    Bearing packs
    of dharma,
    emotional baggage.
    Daily distractions
    of who loves, hates,
    wants who, what.
    Police rousting
    neo-boddhisattva
    saints. Poets
    standing by
    streetlights dreaming.
    New wilderness
    cities burning
    eyes with
    toxins, horrific
    violence.
    No mind
    safe from
    dispair and
    wanting,
    dressed up
    samsara of
    opinions and
    laws. Banal,
    former artists
    selling dreck.
    bowtie wearing
    salesmen
    begging for
    bonuses as
    solitary
    crackheads
    comment with
    thunderous silences
    agreeing
    with moon
    and sage
    mountains.







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