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    dots Submission Name: Aegri somnia vanadots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio State
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 174/189/127
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAegri somnia vanadots
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    Tranquil in constructed form
    I wrap myself with less enthusiasm
    In layers and leafs and overcoats
    Protecting and reinforcing
    Nothing

    Metaphorically speaking
    The comparison is sound
    Like rhythm and rhyme
    as complimentary
    as nimble tongues in unison
    A choir or chorus line
    To project
    Something from nothing,
    And a near-sighted fate to
    Return to nothing once again
    Always fighting a common enemy
    The cold, the winter, the still ideology
    Maybe the brief requited love of genius
    That inspiring but elusive mindset

    I aspire

    Swirling around my battered sense of self
    are ethics and moral inclinations external in origin
    and devoid of any sense of logic or sensibility
    No chain is formed from these fragments
    No whole or sense of greater good can come
    From the remnants of who I’m left with
    Myself is something undefined by definition
    constantly controversial to my own analysis
    I tend to sink deeper into something sinister and foreign
    Naturally this process is repeated

    I am a reflection of my experiences
    A collection of inputs and outputs
    A universe of cause and effect




    Submitted on 2009-01-27 15:48:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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