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    dots Submission Name: Enoughdots
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    Author: PiperH
    ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 253/299/172
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1016
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 855



    Description:
       What do you think? A spur of the moment poem for me... I had been talking about the subject of spouse abuse earlier, so I thought I'd write about it.



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    dotsEnoughdots
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    I just wanted to tell you
    that I have had enough
    of you and your stuff
    you and I are through

    I tell you, Ive had enough
    of that shadow on your face
    hitting me with that vase
    you are weak, not tough

    Go ahead, tell a lie
    hold me tight and kiss me
    well, your gonna miss me
    when i'm waving to you goodbye

    when you raise your fist
    I'll kick you where it hurts
    rub your face into the dirt
    this marriage did not exist

    well, I've had enough
    so I must be leaving
    but trust me, i won't be grieving
    when you are put into those cuffs

    because i am tough
    and i will never cry
    over some bastard of a guy
    who pushed me past enough...





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