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Author: PiperH
ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 253 /299 /172
Words: 138
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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What do you think? A spur of the moment poem for me... I had been talking about the subject of spouse abuse earlier, so I thought I'd write about it.


I just wanted to tell you
that I have had enough
of you and your stuff
you and I are through

I tell you, Ive had enough
of that shadow on your face
hitting me with that vase
you are weak, not tough

Go ahead, tell a lie
hold me tight and kiss me
well, your gonna miss me
when i'm waving to you goodbye

when you raise your fist
I'll kick you where it hurts
rub your face into the dirt
this marriage did not exist

well, I've had enough
so I must be leaving
but trust me, i won't be grieving
when you are put into those cuffs

because i am tough
and i will never cry
over some bastard of a guy
who pushed me past enough...

Submitted on 2009-01-28 00:45:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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