Description: A poem I wrote as a present of sorts for a one year anniversarry that became 13 months just yesterdsay I love you babe
You are the hand that keeps my heart beating.
You are the bandage that stops my bleeding.
You are the enchanter who holds me under your spell.
You are the comforting arm that keeps me still.
You are the blanket that keeps me warm at night.
You are the lantern, my very own light.
Canít you see that you are all I need?
How can I describe the way you make me feel?
Another day without you is another day wasted.
Now and forever, I will always love you.
Do you miss me? My heart aches every second weíre apart.
Love is a complicated thing, something I can only achieve with you.
Everyone says we are better alone, Iím nothing without you.
Remember me always, because Iím not letting go.
Ahh... I say this is like a classic, no, yeah, better than that poem I heard
um.... can't remember... to long ago...
But I know this one is better
A true show of love and compassion twards umm.. I don't need to know
I don't know how to respond to this piece. It wasn't your best but it was still good. I could pick up on some of your feelings. I have close to the same problem...he just doesn't know just how much I care for him. He is like a brother to me I don't like him any more than a close friend. How do you tell someone that they mean alot to you without conveying the wrong idea? Sorry I was just thinking and typing and I'm too lazy to delete it.
I love you babe. You know that. Thanks for the present! :P SOrry it took so long to respond, my power is out. I like the part about me being your blanket, its sweet that you put that in there. its a beautiful poem :)