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Pie


Author: Sephiroth
ASL Info:    22/Male/WA
Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 60 /67 /29
Words: 49
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 868
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 358



Description:


I was sitting in History of Christianity and wrote this during the part where he was explaining the conversion of Augustine of Hippo.


Pie



I like pie
So versatile
In texture and taste
Nearly all combinations delicious

I like pie
At any time
Everywhere possible
It is perfect for any occasion

I like pie
You can eat it
You can throw it
It has numerous uses

I
<3
Pie




Submitted on 2009-01-28 23:18:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's so simple, yet so perfectly kept. I think that best suits it however, so sweet so pure, so small, like the pie itself no ha ha, i love the idea of pie too, i mean PIE wow pretty damn original I'm serious, it's shortly good, ha ha and innocent too
Good job on it!
| Posted on 2009-01-31 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]


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