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    dots Submission Name: I feeldots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 339/412/258
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 89
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    dotsI feeldots
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    I feel like these walls are closing
    closing in on me..
    The air is trapped and I can no longer breathe.
    They told me I'd be fine
    that I just had to bend with the times
    but it's gotten to hard to handle.
    The truth starts pouring
    and the truth, well it hurts.
    I am trying to deal with these
    feelings, but
    dealing with them alone is way to much for me.
    I am afraid that you'll leave me
    that you'll walk away without looking back.
    These were the hardest words to say to you
    lets wait babe
    lets not get married
    lets live our life
    please don't leave me.




    Submitted on 2009-01-29 02:01:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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